Noon Star

See the shine
The glow of energy
That transcends the universe
Creating life wanted

Locating that cosmic belonging
This everlasting laws
Laws of attraction
Needing a person

Wanting a touch
A slight caress
The passion of a certain look
Or maybe a noon star

See the star is there
Never left
It’s just that the sun
Over powerful rays

Blocking the reality
Of what is there
Never left
Staring at you royally

I’m sure you can map this
Better than the zodiac
The truth is not complicated
But ignored

Forgotten to all humanity
Because of created battles
And lost souls
You must want it

Need is not an option
Flowing is the best solution
To merge as a whole
Forming a bond

But again,
That is like a noon star
Seen but you can’t focus
Feel but you can’t touch

Actual but it appears far away
Lost in another time
A different era

© 2011

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25 Comments

Filed under Dreams, Love, Passion, Poetry

25 responses to “Noon Star

  1. This is amazing, and truthful, brilliant write, :), Thank you, much appreciated, WS

  2. Nice verse – like “the glow of energy that transcends the universe”..:))

  3. Beautiful! The Noon Star – there but we seldom acknowledge it.
    I like those two lines the most – elusive.
    ~Seen but you can’t focus
    Feel but you can’t touch

  4. The truth is not complicated
    But ignored- I love that line – so true – I enjoyed reading this

  5. What very beautiful words… thought inducing… I love this.

  6. Beautiful and very thought-provoking

  7. ‘the truth not complicated, but ignored’…fantastic words and a great poem

  8. Thought-provoking and beautiful… I can feel it!

  9. Anna Montgomery

    But again,
    That is like a noon star
    Seen but you can’t focus
    Feel but you can’t touch

    Actual but it appears far away
    Lost in another time
    A different era

    I am fascinated by liminal spaces. You captured this well.

  10. Evocative imagery, layers to sift through always makes such great poetry. Wonderful write ~ Rose

  11. brilliant choice of words, all expressing and powerful…

  12. Forgotten to all humanity
    Because of created battles
    And lost souls
    You must want it

    Well said!

  13. Very cool and cosmic. : )

  14. wow this is externally touching and beautiful!

  15. This is a lovely poem 🙂

  16. Very descriptive and vivid. A lonely stroll through space and reality.

  17. Kay Salady

    Nice piece. Thank you!

  18. this is very true. the truth is there, but no one bothers to pay attention it.
    keep it up! 😉 very nice poem!

  19. authentic words.

    well expressed.

  20. “The truth is not complicated
    But ignored”
    How very true! Stark naked thoughts adorned with the loveliest of images. Loved it!

  21. carrie

    Nicely put ru!

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