Damn it’s hot
Sweat is falling from the pours
Making the anticipation wonder
Pressure is like clamping down
See how long it can be held
With hands on fire
Now look at pressure

© 2011



Filed under Loneliness, Pain, Poetry

3 responses to “Pressure

  1. striking opening line, well done.


  2. Pressure…..Another muse that I’m not particularly fond of but who almost always inspires me. Love the way you put it down. Two thumbs up!

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