No!

No!
My dreams haunt me
I am questioning my reality

No!
My sight has abandoned me
Forcing my eyes blind

No!
I must open my other senses
Hear the hushed speeches

No!
I need help to taste
The truth of the living

No!
Someone touch my ambiance
And provide me relaxation

© 2012

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11 Comments

Filed under Darkness, Dreams, Honesty, Pain, Poetry, Powerful

11 responses to “No!

  1. ~L

    Mr! You are becoming my favorite poet here… this was one of my favorites… maybe it’s because I felt it so deep as I could relate with the words. You are a talented poet my friend! 😉

    ~L

  2. dandylion28

    A great poem!

  3. enjoy a relaxing day,

    there are too many illusions blind us and mislead us,
    live for today, feel great.

    powerful expression, thanks for linking to poetry picnic.

  4. other sense definitely useful in tasting life’s relaxations.

    simply and eloquent words,
    a fun read.

    🙂

  5. Here’s hoping you will find your relaxation.

  6. hmm interesting, I liked the conversation with self, while questioning one’s reality, intriguing.

    happy gooseberry day!!!

    http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2012/01/29/the-dark-side-of-the-moon/

  7. This is powerful,

    poem on.

  8. I would like to thank you for the efforts you’ve put in writing this website. I’m hoping the same high-grade website post from you in the upcoming as well. Actually your creative writing abilities has encouraged me to get my own web site now. Actually the blogging is spreading its wings fast. Your write up is a good example of it.

  9. I searched deep within myself while reading your content and it touched me deeply. Thank you

  10. wow I liked this one
    So much conveyed in a different style.
    Great poetry and great blog

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